*This is my practice writing proposal. If you find some wrong points, please help me correct it. Thank you.*
Writing Proposal Practice I
Topic: Should the death penalty be abolished?
It’s common knowledge that people who
commit the horrible crimes would be sentenced to the capital punishment. There
are two objectives to this proposal: first is to comment a previous suggestion
and second, to present an idea of my own.
As we understand it, crimes
happen every day, and the criminals must be punished for what they have done.
The sentences must be proportionate to the law. For some severe case of crime,
the criminal would be sentenced to death. But I do not feel that the
death penalty is the true way to punish them. We assign the legal
punishment to make the offender accept their mistakes and take responsibility
for their action. But the death penalty is the punishment that got nothing but
lost another life. Sometime
mistake happens, the innocent people may be killed by slander. So I believe the
capital punishment is not work.
Another
alternative to this problem would be to sentence to
prison for life. A sentence of life without parole may live like a hell. But
this is what we need to make the criminal feel for their action. They still
have the chance to allow mistakes to be corrected. Furthermore, some of
them may prove their innocent later. So we don’t have to lose worthless life. I
think this is the good alternative for the sentence of life.
I
hope that my proposal will be given serious consideration. I look forward to
discussing my ideas with you in the convenient time.
death penalty = capital punishment = sentence to death = โทษประหารชีวิต
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